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Iíll never forget the smell
Of your neck so soft
Your heart thumping in your chest
I feel the gentle clutch of your hand in mine
And I canít breath.

My heart stops still
In a flutter of happiness
When your skin touches mine
I can hear you breathing in my ear
And I canít breath

Your smileís so divine
That it melts my very soul
When I see it crawl gently across your face
It can tell a thousand stories.
And I canít breath.

Your eyes sparkle
And mine water at the sight
I think over and over - Youíre so beautiful
And your looks could kill me
And I canít breath.

And your touch could make me cry
You could crush me with just one glance
Cause I love you
I love you.
Just a poem I made
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EphemeralMonochrome Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
The repetition of the phrase 'And I can't breath' makes this all the better in my opinion. :3
Lovely poem!
Isagawa-Elou Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My, it's amazing. I absolutely love it. 
In fact I love it so much I proposed you something... Please go to see your notes ;)
Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I typed "poem" in the search box... your beautiful poem was the first one in the results here. :) Absolutely stunning.
AlmrixGirl Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like your poem:)

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ieelleme Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Beautiful, you captured that feeling wonderfully :)
IIxXNinjaCatXxII Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Love It!!

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ehkachan27 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
loved the last. :)
NercoGurl Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! <3 omfg LOVE IT! sounds like a vampire poem or somthing but... ITS HOT!
taichitwo Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love it.Heart 
Falrock Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Nice man, i like the free form style of it.
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