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I’ll never forget the smell
Of your neck so soft
Your heart thumping in your chest
I feel the gentle clutch of your hand in mine
And I can’t breath.

My heart stops still
In a flutter of happiness
When your skin touches mine
I can hear you breathing in my ear
And I can’t breath

Your smile’s so divine
That it melts my very soul
When I see it crawl gently across your face
It can tell a thousand stories.
And I can’t breath.

Your eyes sparkle
And mine water at the sight
I think over and over - You’re so beautiful
And your looks could kill me
And I can’t breath.

And your touch could make me cry
You could crush me with just one glance
Cause I love you
I love you.
©2006-2009 ~MemoriesAreBleeding
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Just a poem I made

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:iconsadistic-sabotage:
A beautiful poem. I can relate, though he gave his heart to someone else.

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:music: I'll Feel My Heart Implode... I'm Breaking Out, Escaping Now, Feeling My Faith Erode... :music:
:iconmemoriesarebleeding:
Awwh darling. That's sad to hear =( That was made for my boyfriend. And so was "you" but he lives on the other side of our county, so I can't see him much, which makes my poem seem like I'm talking about an ex =|. Thankyou so much for the comments. REALLY appreciated =)

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x -PaTcH- x

[x][If.It's.Healthier.To.Leave.You.Be][May.A.Sickness.Come.And.Set.Me.Free][Kill.Me.While.I.Still.Believe.That.You.Were.Meant.For.Me] - [x]
:iconsadistic-sabotage:
Well, he's not an ex of mine. He just happens to be dating a close friend of mine. And you're greatly welcome. :D

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:music: I'll Feel My Heart Implode... I'm Breaking Out, Escaping Now, Feeling My Faith Erode... :music:
:iconmemoriesarebleeding:
Lmao, ok then. Yey =)

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x -PaTcH- x

[x][If.It's.Healthier.To.Leave.You.Be][May.A.Sickness.Come.And.Set.Me.Free][Kill.Me.While.I.Still.Believe.That.You.Were.Meant.For.Me] - [x]
:iconchelzielindemann:
Very very good. It makes me think of my love too.
:iconasentimentalguy:
Gorgeous, I love it, I just linked my gf to this!

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Life begins when you can die happy
:iconlostuforia:
i feel the exact same way about my boyfriend. Every word of that speaks from my heart too. rocks, doesn't it? lol.

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